Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Samuel Sprinting! By Kayden


Room 6 were practising for the cross country and Samuel was caught on film sprinting around the courts.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Kayden

    Nice work and you done a great Job in succeeding your blurb.

    Awesome Work!!!

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  2. Hi Kayden
    I realy like how you say wish class room is doing running.
    Keep up the great worke!!

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  3. Good job Kayden your writing and spelling has improved. The picture you choose is like a
    beginner type because it's easier to write
    and I think your smart for doing that.(Because your beginner too no offense) I wonder
    why not many people have commented on this blurb.

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  4. HI KAYDEN

    I LOVE YOUR BLURB
    BUT NO IEFENCE
    BUT YOU COULD USE
    MORE ILLUSTRATING.

    KIND REGUARDS
    SULIASI

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  5. Hey Kayden

    Nice job and you worked really hard. Keep up the good work........

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  6. Hi Kayden
    Your Funny blurb was very good for your stage in writing! I'm very suprised that you have written more descrptive sentences than some people! Next time you might want to write more but this was your best so keep up the good work and I hope to see more of it!

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  7. Hi Kayden,

    Your photo blurb is amazingly cool because it is good how you described Samuel running!

    He does look really exausted!

    I think that this is your best work1

    Well Done & I hope to comment on more of your fantabulous work!
    (Just a tip) You might want to write alittle bit more but this is some of your amazing work so good job anyway.
    From Imarny

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