Good job Kayden your writing and spelling has improved. The picture you choose is like a beginner type because it's easier to write and I think your smart for doing that.(Because your beginner too no offense) I wonder why not many people have commented on this blurb.
Hi Kayden Your Funny blurb was very good for your stage in writing! I'm very suprised that you have written more descrptive sentences than some people! Next time you might want to write more but this was your best so keep up the good work and I hope to see more of it!
Your photo blurb is amazingly cool because it is good how you described Samuel running!
He does look really exausted!
I think that this is your best work1
Well Done & I hope to comment on more of your fantabulous work! (Just a tip) You might want to write alittle bit more but this is some of your amazing work so good job anyway. From Imarny
Hi Kayden
ReplyDeleteNice work and you done a great Job in succeeding your blurb.
Awesome Work!!!
Hi Kayden
ReplyDeleteI realy like how you say wish class room is doing running.
Keep up the great worke!!
Good job Kayden your writing and spelling has improved. The picture you choose is like a
ReplyDeletebeginner type because it's easier to write
and I think your smart for doing that.(Because your beginner too no offense) I wonder
why not many people have commented on this blurb.
HI KAYDEN
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR BLURB
BUT NO IEFENCE
BUT YOU COULD USE
MORE ILLUSTRATING.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
Hey Kayden
ReplyDeleteNice job and you worked really hard. Keep up the good work........
Hi Kayden
ReplyDeleteYour Funny blurb was very good for your stage in writing! I'm very suprised that you have written more descrptive sentences than some people! Next time you might want to write more but this was your best so keep up the good work and I hope to see more of it!
Hi Kayden,
ReplyDeleteYour photo blurb is amazingly cool because it is good how you described Samuel running!
He does look really exausted!
I think that this is your best work1
Well Done & I hope to comment on more of your fantabulous work!
(Just a tip) You might want to write alittle bit more but this is some of your amazing work so good job anyway.
From Imarny