Sunday, September 12, 2010

MEAT PATTIE PARTY! by Chevy-Lee


MMMH! Smells delicious! Meat patties going on our buns. Olley is holding a pack of meat patties - they smelt great. Olley was funny and he made nice meat patties! AND THAT WAS YUMMY IN MY TUMMY!

4 comments:

  1. Hi Chevy-lee,
    I like how you used lots of descriptive adjectives in your little blurb!
    This may be your best blurb so far!
    Well done and keep up the good work!
    I hope to see more!
    From Imarny

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  2. Hi Chevy

    Your story was amazing and it looked like you enjoyed your burger.

    Keep up the good work!!!!!!

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  3. Wow,
    Did you really do
    this chevylee.
    I am suprised.You
    blowed my mind away.

    Great job

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  4. A little blurb filled with lot's of expression
    is what I like. I'm surprissed about your title,
    I've never seen you write a title like that.

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