In this photo my best friend and I are running our hearts out, while posing for the camera puffing out. Miss Day keeps trying to catch us on the camera but we were too fast. Then she got us!
Hey, I agree with Andrew, Miss Day dose have a bright camera beam! Anyway, it was an awesome blurb! However, I think you could have used some more descriptive words.
Your Blurb was my 3rd favorite peice of writting because you made it simple and not like the other student's blurbs which I could probably doze of in.But I could still get more out of you than you would sure be my 1st favorite.
Keep up the amazing work and remember to write a little more!
I supose you trying to dodge Ms Day's super camera beam. Back to the blurb it was an awesome one not much expression but awesome.
ReplyDeleteHi Lavinia
ReplyDeleteYou had a cool story and that you had a shiny smile.It's like you had great time running around the course.
Hi Lavinia & Stefanie,
ReplyDeleteI like your short story about posing.
You both has such great smiles!
From Imarny
To Lavinia
ReplyDeleteI like your expressive story and your photo. Your bright smile filled me with joy. Keep up the good work and keep that bright smile on your dial.
By Tyla
Hey, I agree with Andrew, Miss Day dose have a bright camera beam! Anyway, it was an awesome blurb! However, I think you could have used some more descriptive words.
ReplyDeletePeace.
You have a great title.
ReplyDeleteYou have big bright smiles.
You have a great disription.
Keep up the maverlous work.
Hi
ReplyDeleteI liked your title and great smiles.
Regan
HAY LAVINIA
ReplyDeleteWHO'S SMILE WAS
TIRING THE MOST
BECAUSE TO ME IT
LOOKED LIKE STEFANIE.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
Hi Lavinia
ReplyDeleteYour Blurb was my 3rd favorite peice of writting because you made it simple and not like the other student's blurbs which I could probably doze of in.But I could still get more out of you than you would sure be my 1st favorite.
Keep up the amazing work and remember to write a little more!