Wednesday, September 8, 2010

The Day Iron Brion Came - by Shaye


Today we went to the hall and had a very special guest coming to teach us about healthy eating. Iron Brion!! Iron was joined by his two mates: Olly and Sarah. Iron Brion talked about the 4 main food groups, they were...meat & meat alternatives, fruit & vegetables, milk & dairy products and last but not least..breads and cereals. I also thought about why we have meat & meat alternatives - it's very sad!! We had a dance- off between 2x pupils from each class (boy and girl). The best girl dancer was Khorus and best boy dancer was McDevitt- who were two very good dancers. Then we all got up and did the Iron Brion dance or something like that! Hahahaha!!I had a wonderful time and a choice burger! Thanks Iron Brion!

4 comments:

  1. Hi Shaye

    You had an outstanding story and it actually sounded pretty good.You worked really hard on your blurb.

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  2. Hi Shaye

    FANTASTIC DESRIPTIVE! words and good listening skills you got there and Its long so keep up the good work Shaye.

    From Howard

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  3. Dear Shaye,
    Your story is great because its got fantastic?/descriptive words in it but it is a bit to short.
    Well Done!
    From Imarny

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  4. KIA ORA SHAYE

    MAN I WONDER SHAYE IF YOU
    SHOULD BE IN PRIMARY OR
    IN COLLAGE.

    KINDREGUARDS
    SULIASI

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