Thursday, September 2, 2010

The Iron Brion Show by Peata.

Hi my name is Peata. On Monday the 30th August we all got to have a free burger each.
This is my twin sister Keilini holding a burger.
The whole school went.

9 comments:

  1. Dear Peata,
    Wow your sisters burger looks great. I had one of those burgers and it was delicious!
    Keep up the great work!

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  2. Hi Peata,
    Good photo blurb about your sister. I didn't even notice that its Keilini. Keep up the good "blurb work'

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  3. Hi Peata!
    Great photo blurb, you used some cool words!

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  4. Hi Peata

    Amazing work! by the way your picture looks awesome work.

    By Howard

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  5. Hi Peata,
    Your photo blurb is great and really descriptive.
    Well done!
    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more.
    From Imarny

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  6. Amazing work.
    Nice and simple
    to read.

    from Katopau

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  7. Hey Peata

    your sister must of enjoyed her burger and she also had a pretty smile that shined like the sky.

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  8. Hi Peata
    Your blurb about the Iron Brion show was amazing because of the descriptive sentences. Did you know I really liked the burgers as well. You used millions of brilliant words, no wonder you always have great work.
    Keep up the awesome work I hope to see more.

    p.s I think you ould put a bit more taha into your pencil and turn that brain on extra on then your work will be as good as ever!

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  9. HEY PEATA

    I JUST LOVE YOUR PHOTO
    OF YOUR SISTER KEELINI.

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