Hi Peata Your blurb about the Iron Brion show was amazing because of the descriptive sentences. Did you know I really liked the burgers as well. You used millions of brilliant words, no wonder you always have great work. Keep up the awesome work I hope to see more.
p.s I think you ould put a bit more taha into your pencil and turn that brain on extra on then your work will be as good as ever!
Hi my name is Peata. On Monday the 30th August we all got to have a free burger each.
Dear Peata,
ReplyDeleteWow your sisters burger looks great. I had one of those burgers and it was delicious!
Keep up the great work!
Hi Peata,
ReplyDeleteGood photo blurb about your sister. I didn't even notice that its Keilini. Keep up the good "blurb work'
Hi Peata!
ReplyDeleteGreat photo blurb, you used some cool words!
Hi Peata
ReplyDeleteAmazing work! by the way your picture looks awesome work.
By Howard
Hi Peata,
ReplyDeleteYour photo blurb is great and really descriptive.
Well done!
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more.
From Imarny
Amazing work.
ReplyDeleteNice and simple
to read.
from Katopau
Hey Peata
ReplyDeleteyour sister must of enjoyed her burger and she also had a pretty smile that shined like the sky.
Hi Peata
ReplyDeleteYour blurb about the Iron Brion show was amazing because of the descriptive sentences. Did you know I really liked the burgers as well. You used millions of brilliant words, no wonder you always have great work.
Keep up the awesome work I hope to see more.
p.s I think you ould put a bit more taha into your pencil and turn that brain on extra on then your work will be as good as ever!
HEY PEATA
ReplyDeleteI JUST LOVE YOUR PHOTO
OF YOUR SISTER KEELINI.