10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1. We all counted back from ten until we said one. Iron Brion came running down with a huge smile on his face. He was probably thinking of the yummy burgers. Later on Brion was talking about how important our four food groups are. The first food group was meat and meat alternatives. The second food group was fruit and vegetables. The last two groups were breads and cereals and dairy products. My favorite part of the road show was the Iron Brion boogie time.
Excellent blurb I like how long your blurb
ReplyDeletewas whinch is good because it shows
you are smart on writing. I aslo liked the
Iron Brion's boogie battle time too.
Hi Arianna
ReplyDeleteNice title,beggining,and ending.
Arianna, you done a nice job and you done a awesome job.
HI ARIANNA
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR PERFECTLY DESRIBED BLURB
HAVE YOU EVER FOUGHT OF BEING
A TEACHER WHEN YOU GROW UP.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
What a excellent
ReplyDeletewell puncuated blurb.
Your blurb was informative
and long.You have great
gramma.Awsome title.
Great job cousin
from Katopau
Thanks everyone for writting comment's and actually i've never thought of being a teacher even though i already have plans(boxer,rugby player,doctor) but thanks anyways
ReplyDeleteHi Arianna
ReplyDeleteI agree - you would make a great teacher! You are very patient, kind and helpful...not that I want to sway you away from becoming a boxer!! Did you want to borrow my green boxing gloves tomorrow and and take on Samuel to see if you can handle the jandal? :)
Miss D
Hey Arianna
ReplyDeleteDidn't you want to be a siciatrist(I don't know how to spell it), a brain surgeon.
Anyway, I really like your story because your an amazing writer so you put ALOT of descriptive words and adjectives in it!
Well done Arianna and I hope to see more!
From one of your BFFL's
Imarny