Today all of the classes went to the hall to see Iron Brion. Iron Brion told everyone about a healthy balanced diet and how it works to help us grow. Part of the show that I liked was Iron Brion and the kids dancing on the stage. My next favourite part was when Sara gave out prizes to the people who danced on the stage and answered the questions. At the end all of the show all of the classes lined up for some burgers.
Room 5 @ Panmure Bridge School
Saturday, September 18, 2010
Delicous Hamburgers! by Tienira
Today all of the classes went to the hall to see Iron Brion. Iron Brion told everyone about a healthy balanced diet and how it works to help us grow. Part of the show that I liked was Iron Brion and the kids dancing on the stage. My next favourite part was when Sara gave out prizes to the people who danced on the stage and answered the questions. At the end all of the show all of the classes lined up for some burgers.
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HI TIENIRA
ReplyDeleteI LIKE THE STORY YOU ROTE ABOYT IRON BRION AND SARAH.IF I CAN SAY THAT YOU SHOULD BE A JOURNALIST.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
Wow,
ReplyDeleteDid you really
do all this long fantastic
piece of work.There is one
small mistake,you should hav
used past tense when you said today ,
but i still think that you have
worked hard doing a long blurb like
that.
Keep up your spectacular
work.
From Katopau
Hey tienira you did that long fantastic i relly liked it you did grat
ReplyDeleteHi Tinera
ReplyDeleteWow amazing work. If only you wrote more of your fantabulous work.I loved the detailed sentences and the photo pick was verry well picked. I think you were hungry the time you saw the photo cause i was!
I hope to see more!
Hi Tienira,
ReplyDeleteWhat a spectacular piece of writing, did you really write this photo blurb by yourself because it is great!
Well done, keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your amazing work from you!
From Imarny
Hi Everyone
ReplyDeleteThank you for righting such a lovely comment on my worke and thank you.
I really like your photo because it always
ReplyDeletemakes me hungry. You got the fullstops in the
right place. Next time add ajectives to
make it more exciting to read.
Hey Tienera
ReplyDeleteI hope you and the others are enjoying there holiday's and that you have a good time...