Awesome blurb about the pratise for cross-country. Great work Jimmy. You may want to write a bit more sentences for the reader to feel like he/she was there.
Sorry for not writting much but when you write alot it inspires me to tell you what you need to work on and how good it is!
Hi Jimmy, You look really exausted in your photo! Did you really do 40 laps(just kidding), ithink that you probably did!
Your photo blurb is interesting to read but next time you might want to try to make your and make your photo blurb a bit longer but it was still interesting to read.
Hi Jimmy
ReplyDeleteAWESOME Work Maybe you might be faster than me maybe.
From Howard
Hi Jimmy
ReplyDeleteAwesome blurb about the pratise for cross-country. Great work Jimmy. You may want to write a bit more sentences for the reader to feel like he/she was there.
Sorry for not writting much but when you write alot it inspires me to tell you what you need to work on and how good it is!
Hi Jimmy,
ReplyDeleteYou look really exausted in your photo! Did you really do 40 laps(just kidding), ithink that you probably did!
Your photo blurb is interesting to read but next time you might want to try to make your and make your photo blurb a bit longer but it was still interesting to read.
From Imarny
glenbrae room8
ReplyDeletewow you look like you are so fast at running
from joan an june
Hey Jimmy
ReplyDeleteNice work in running and it looked like you were trying really hard in running.
Awesome work!!!
HI JIM
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR INSTRESETING
BLURB,AND BY THE LOOKS OF
IT, IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR THE
ONLY ONE WHO REACHED 50.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI