Monday, September 6, 2010

Cross Country Run Day by Jimmy


Last time we were practising for cross county and when we were practising I was piggy-backing Keegan. I got tired and I told him to get off then we stopped.

10 comments:

  1. Hi Jimmy
    I really think your blurb about cross-country was very funny. It expressed your feeling's very well.I felt tired after the run to,even though i didn't do much of the running.

    I hope to see more of your wonderful work!

    Great job

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  2. Hi Jimmy

    I liked your blurb because of how you told us you were getting tired and how you told him to get of.

    Nice Job

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  3. Jimmy

    I liked your blurb about you piggy backing Keegan.It must of been heavy as! keep up the good and funny work

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  4. Dear Jimmy,
    I think that Keegan really just wanted to get out of running. Hahaha. Keep up the brilliant work.

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  5. Dear Jimmy,
    Your short story is nice and descriptive!
    Why were you piggy-backing Keegan anyway?
    Well done & I hope to see more fantastic pieces of writing!
    From Imarny.

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  6. Great job.
    Great description
    of what happend.
    I think Keegan was
    lazy.

    From Katopau

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  7. Hi Jimmy
    Your blurb about practising for cross-country was amazing because of the descriptive sentences describing the picture of you and Keegan. Did you know I didn't really like running as well. It dosen't say in your blurb but I knew you didn't from the photo you looked puffed out. I like how you explained how tired you were after giving keegan a ride on your back! No wonder you always have great work. Keep up the awesome blurb writting.
    I hope to see more of your work this year.

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  8. Hi Jimmy

    I think your blurb was good and the picture was cool because you and Keegan.

    Regan

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  9. I belive you have a good heart for
    helping Keagan because you must
    have not cared about the pain(If you felt it)
    and how many laps did you do
    with Keagan on your back?

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  10. HI JIMMYOU

    MAN YOU ARE STRONG
    JIM, YOU SHOULD OF
    TOLD HIM TO GET OFF.

    KIND REGUARDS
    SULIASI

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