Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Cup Of Coffee by Katopau


It was blog night. I was sleepy.
My mum came on my computer and
I went off. So I made a cup of
coffee and I took a sip.The coffee
touched my tongue with
its flavor and awakened me.

10 comments:

  1. Katopau your blurb about your photo was so good like a poet wrote it!
    Aren't you a bit young for coffee!! great posing by your sister oh and you! keep up the good blurbing!!

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  2. HI Katopau

    are you sure it woke you up did it burn your tounge.

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  3. Hello,
    Your work is awesome. I love the blurb and the photo.

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  4. Dear Katopau,
    In your story you have used alot of descriptive adjectives!
    I like that you told the readers how nice the coffee was when it touched your lips.
    Well done and I hope to see more great work!
    From Imarny.

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  5. Hey! It's me Andrew I really like your great
    style of writing it's really cool

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  6. Hi Katopau
    Your blurb about the cup of coffee you sipped was amazing because of the descriptive adjectives. Did you know my dad really likes coffee as well. I like how you explained your sip of coffee ina detailed way! You used millions of brilliant words, no wonder you always have great work. Keep up the awesome work. I hope to see more of it.

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  7. Hey Katopau

    You look as happy as I do when a cup of steaming coffee is in my hand!! Careful you don't get addicted to it like I am :) I really like the way you have written short sentences for effect. Your sentences sound tired until you sip the coffee - and then your last sentence is very descriptive!

    Miss Day

    P.S. Keep up the great blogging at home!!

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  8. Hi Katapou

    You must of enjoyed your cup of coffey cause it looked good.

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  9. Hi Katopau
    Its me your friend you should make coffee for your mum is well.




    From Paenganui

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  10. HI KATAPOU

    I HOPE YOU LIKED IT
    BECAUSE YOU SHOULD OF
    MADE SOME FOR YOUR MUM.

    KIND REGUARDS
    SULIASI

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