Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Iron Brion's Tenderest Burgers -by Howard


The burgers looked nice and delicious and tender,
but when I took one bite I was almost full,
because the day before Iron Brion came to school
I was eating lots of lollies at home and I still have
45 lollies left!

10 comments:

  1. Hi Howard
    Great blurb about Iron Brion. It had awesome adjective's and the burgers looked very yummy. Hope I see more of your work on the blog!!

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  2. Hello Howard,
    Great blurb about those burgers. That seems like a lot of burgers. You should find out how much students are at school! That would be awesome to know.

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  3. Howard,
    Your teasing me! Fantastic blurb by the way! I thought you used heaps of describing words! Keep up the amazing work

    p.s:Wheres my Lollies?

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  4. Hey Howard!
    I thought the burgers looked real choice too! The words that you used were awesome!

    By the way you have to give me some sweets too now!

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  5. Hi Howard,
    Your story is really great because you have got so many descriptive words in it!
    With that many lollies, you could give the whole class some!
    P.S How did you gather so many lollies with out eating them anyway!!!
    From Imarny.

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  6. I agree with your
    burger explanation.
    Keep up your amazing work.

    from your friend katopau

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  7. hi howard
    i liRed how you spoke clearly
    from halaiano

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  8. Hi Howard
    I like your story because you put interesting words in.

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  9. HI

    HOWARD MAYBE YOU
    SHOULD NOT PUT
    DELICIOUS BURGERS.

    KIND REGUARDS
    SULIASI

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  10. Hey Howard

    I can see you own people some lollies.
    Anyways, nice title and great blurb.....

    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!

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