On Monday the 30th August, Iron Brion came to our school and we were laughing hard out. He did funny things like him saying a shoe instead of atchoo. We all laughed but that was an old funny joke. When Iron Brion came to our school everybody was happy and everyone was saying "Iron Brion - where's our burgers?" They were excited. When we were watching the show he would do funny things like rewinding the video. The show was funny and at the end of the show we did a dance.
Hi kingi
ReplyDeleteI like your title and your photo it looks very cool.I liked your story it sounds cool.
Hi Kingi
ReplyDeleteF A B U L O U S! W O R K Kingi It was funny when Iron Brion said AAAAA AAAAAA SHOE! In stead of AAAAACHHHEEEWWW! So yeah good work keep it up. laterz.
From Howard
Your blurb was filled with lot's of words(I mean your blurb was long and exciting)
ReplyDeleteYou had correct punctuation and a bit of
expression.(Did a teacher check your punctuation?)
Hi king i relly like how you wirte your stroy keep it up grat work.
ReplyDeleteHi Kingi
ReplyDeleteI just read what the other comments were and they were exactly write, though i didn't quite understand what jimmy wrote. Enough about them let me talk to you about your blurb for the iron brion show, it was spetacular but I agree on what andrew said did Miss Day check your blurb??
Carry on your amazing work!
Hi Kingi,
ReplyDeleteYour photo blurb is absoluty amazing because it is interesting for the reader to read and you used so much punctuation and actually in there exact right places!
I really liked that funny old joke when he said a shoe instead of acthoo!!!
HI KINGI
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!FOR A MINUTE I
THOUGHT THA WAS ARIANNA'S
BLURB
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
Hey Kingi
ReplyDeleteWhile I was reading your blurb I thought to myself I wonder if you wrote much as me but for a minute I thought wrong.
Awesome Work!!!!!!!!!