Hi Regan I really like how you used so many nice similes, they are funny too! I think that you should get a rating 10/10 because your short (but still good) story has so many cool similes (like I mentioned before)in it! Well done and keep up the great work, I hope to see more! From Imarny
Samuel is thinking he is the man and Amethyst is walking slowly and Regan is running (that's me!) and Samuel is the (muscley?) man.
Hi there, I am sitting next to Mr Johnston in Wellington and he has shown me your cool work you are publishing. Well done to all of you!
ReplyDeleteDear Regan
ReplyDeleteI really liked your ending because of how you put good simallies.
Hi Regan
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used so many nice similes, they are funny too!
I think that you should get a rating 10/10 because your short (but still good) story has so many cool similes (like I mentioned before)in it!
Well done and keep up the great work, I hope to see more!
From Imarny
That was rather amusing(funny).
ReplyDeleteA great description of every
body in the photo.
P.S:Samuel wrote the
end part.
Keep it up Regan
HI REGAN
ReplyDeleteIT LOOKS LIKE SAMUEL IS
TRYING TO OVER LAP YOU
BY SAMUEL POSING LIKE
A MODEL.
KIND REGUARDS
SULIASI
Hi Regan
ReplyDeleteI like my story. I think my picture is really awesome and I didn't write the end part. Samuel did.I am the man.
Regan