Monday, March 14, 2011

The Smiling Kid - by Kane

This is Swimming Sports Day and this is the obstacle course, which means the person I'm going up against,we both have to swim through hoops under the water. Group one always lost because we had to swim through 4 hoops and Group 2 only had to swim through 3 - so they always won just by a second.


  1. Hey Kane

    Cool blurb and the title was great........ You just need to work on your full stops but the good news is:

    Good Work!!!!!

  2. Hey Kane

    Really like the tittle and great blurb keep it up well done!!!!

  3. Hi Kane

    What a cool and great blurb you have done keep the work up.