Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Cross Country Day by Regan

Samuel is thinking he is the man and Amethyst is walking slowly and Regan is running (that's me!) and Samuel is the (muscley?) man.

6 comments:

  1. Hi there, I am sitting next to Mr Johnston in Wellington and he has shown me your cool work you are publishing. Well done to all of you!

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  2. Dear Regan


    I really liked your ending because of how you put good simallies.

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  3. Hi Regan
    I really like how you used so many nice similes, they are funny too!
    I think that you should get a rating 10/10 because your short (but still good) story has so many cool similes (like I mentioned before)in it!
    Well done and keep up the great work, I hope to see more!
    From Imarny

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  4. That was rather amusing(funny).
    A great description of every
    body in the photo.
    P.S:Samuel wrote the
    end part.
    Keep it up Regan

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  5. HI REGAN

    IT LOOKS LIKE SAMUEL IS
    TRYING TO OVER LAP YOU
    BY SAMUEL POSING LIKE
    A MODEL.

    KIND REGUARDS
    SULIASI

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  6. Hi Regan


    I like my story. I think my picture is really awesome and I didn't write the end part. Samuel did.I am the man.

    Regan

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