Room 6 @ Panmure Bridge School
Hi KaydenNice work and you done a great Job in succeeding your blurb.Awesome Work!!!
Hi KaydenI realy like how you say wish class room is doing running.Keep up the great worke!!
Good job Kayden your writing and spelling has improved. The picture you choose is like a beginner type because it's easier to writeand I think your smart for doing that.(Because your beginner too no offense) I wonderwhy not many people have commented on this blurb.
HI KAYDEN I LOVE YOUR BLURBBUT NO IEFENCEBUT YOU COULD USEMORE ILLUSTRATING.KIND REGUARDSSULIASI
Hey KaydenNice job and you worked really hard. Keep up the good work........
Hi KaydenYour Funny blurb was very good for your stage in writing! I'm very suprised that you have written more descrptive sentences than some people! Next time you might want to write more but this was your best so keep up the good work and I hope to see more of it!
Hi Kayden,Your photo blurb is amazingly cool because it is good how you described Samuel running!He does look really exausted!I think that this is your best work1Well Done & I hope to comment on more of your fantabulous work!(Just a tip) You might want to write alittle bit more but this is some of your amazing work so good job anyway.From Imarny