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Hi JahvanaNice work and I also love the blurb and by the way I'm you #1 fan, and you are the best.
What a great desciption ofyour picture andare you commentingyourself=awkwardGreat job
HiNice work Ilike your title.Regan
Hi JahvanaI really like your title for your photo blurb.But next time I think you should put more descriptive words in it.From Imarny.
HI JAHVANAI LIKE YOUR YOU INCREDIBLEPHOTO AND IF IT WAS YOU WHOTOOK THAT PHOTO YOU GOTTALENT.KIND REGUARDSSULIASI
Hi JahvanaYour blurb is cool ad has alot of detailed sentences.I think you could write a bit more than that but still keep up the good work!From Arianna