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Katopau your blurb about your photo was so good like a poet wrote it!Aren't you a bit young for coffee!! great posing by your sister oh and you! keep up the good blurbing!!
HI Katopauare you sure it woke you up did it burn your tounge.
Hello,Your work is awesome. I love the blurb and the photo.
Dear Katopau,In your story you have used alot of descriptive adjectives!I like that you told the readers how nice the coffee was when it touched your lips.Well done and I hope to see more great work!From Imarny.
Hey! It's me Andrew I really like your great style of writing it's really cool
Hi Katopau Your blurb about the cup of coffee you sipped was amazing because of the descriptive adjectives. Did you know my dad really likes coffee as well. I like how you explained your sip of coffee ina detailed way! You used millions of brilliant words, no wonder you always have great work. Keep up the awesome work. I hope to see more of it.
Hey KatopauYou look as happy as I do when a cup of steaming coffee is in my hand!! Careful you don't get addicted to it like I am :) I really like the way you have written short sentences for effect. Your sentences sound tired until you sip the coffee - and then your last sentence is very descriptive!Miss DayP.S. Keep up the great blogging at home!!
Hi KatapouYou must of enjoyed your cup of coffey cause it looked good.
Hi KatopauIts me your friend you should make coffee for your mum is well.From Paenganui
HI KATAPOUI HOPE YOU LIKED ITBECAUSE YOU SHOULD OFMADE SOME FOR YOUR MUM.KIND REGUARDSSULIASI