Room 6 @ Panmure Bridge School
Hi JimmyI really think your blurb about cross-country was very funny. It expressed your feeling's very well.I felt tired after the run to,even though i didn't do much of the running.I hope to see more of your wonderful work!Great job
Hi Jimmy I liked your blurb because of how you told us you were getting tired and how you told him to get of.Nice Job
JimmyI liked your blurb about you piggy backing Keegan.It must of been heavy as! keep up the good and funny work
Dear Jimmy,I think that Keegan really just wanted to get out of running. Hahaha. Keep up the brilliant work.
Dear Jimmy,Your short story is nice and descriptive!Why were you piggy-backing Keegan anyway?Well done & I hope to see more fantastic pieces of writing!From Imarny.
Great job.Great descriptionof what happend.I think Keegan waslazy.From Katopau
Hi JimmyYour blurb about practising for cross-country was amazing because of the descriptive sentences describing the picture of you and Keegan. Did you know I didn't really like running as well. It dosen't say in your blurb but I knew you didn't from the photo you looked puffed out. I like how you explained how tired you were after giving keegan a ride on your back! No wonder you always have great work. Keep up the awesome blurb writting.I hope to see more of your work this year.
Hi JimmyI think your blurb was good and the picture was cool because you and Keegan.Regan
I belive you have a good heart forhelping Keagan because you musthave not cared about the pain(If you felt it)and how many laps did you dowith Keagan on your back?
HI JIMMYOU MAN YOU ARE STRONG JIM, YOU SHOULD OFTOLD HIM TO GET OFF.KIND REGUARDSSULIASI