Tuesday, August 31, 2010

The Burger Sensation - by Adam


After the great show by Iron Brion, we all ate a burger.
Everyone in my class ate a great burger
and when I ate the burger it tasted like a burger sensation!
It was delicious! When Miss Day took a photo of
me my mouth was blown up.
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6 comments:

  1. ImarnyAugust 31, 2010 at 7:40 PM

    Hi Adam,
    Wow Adam you have put alot of descriptive adjectives in your story especially when you said that your mouth blew up when Miss Day took a photo of you.
    Keep up the good work,
    From Imarny.

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  2. HowardAugust 31, 2010 at 8:46 PM

    Hi Adam

    GREAT! work there its fantastic its funny because your mouth is like puffed up.

    From Howard

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  3. AriannaSeptember 1, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    Hi Adam
    Your blurb was probably the highlight of visiting our class blog because of the amazing descriptive words you put in your photo blurb.
    My burger was a sensation too.

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  4. MariaSeptember 2, 2010 at 11:33 AM

    Dear Adam,
    I love how your cheeks are so huge! You put in so many descriptive words. It truely was amazing!
    Keep up the good work!

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  5. Shaye fletcherSeptember 2, 2010 at 11:39 AM

    Creapy! But cool Adam, once again an amazing blurb from you
    you looked funny as! Great posing by the way! keep up the scary work(not really!)

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  6. TaiSeptember 2, 2010 at 12:10 PM

    Yo Adam!
    Your blurb was so cool and the photo of you was so funny looking it made me L.O.L!

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