Tuesday, August 31, 2010

The Burger Sensation - by Adam

After the great show by Iron Brion, we all ate a burger.
Everyone in my class ate a great burger
and when I ate the burger it tasted like a burger sensation!
It was delicious! When Miss Day took a photo of
me my mouth was blown up.


  1. Hi Adam,
    Wow Adam you have put alot of descriptive adjectives in your story especially when you said that your mouth blew up when Miss Day took a photo of you.
    Keep up the good work,
    From Imarny.

  2. Hi Adam

    GREAT! work there its fantastic its funny because your mouth is like puffed up.

    From Howard

  3. Hi Adam
    Your blurb was probably the highlight of visiting our class blog because of the amazing descriptive words you put in your photo blurb.
    My burger was a sensation too.

  4. Dear Adam,
    I love how your cheeks are so huge! You put in so many descriptive words. It truely was amazing!
    Keep up the good work!

  5. Creapy! But cool Adam, once again an amazing blurb from you
    you looked funny as! Great posing by the way! keep up the scary work(not really!)

  6. Yo Adam!
    Your blurb was so cool and the photo of you was so funny looking it made me L.O.L!