Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Our Water Competition- by Tyla

This is Lavinia and me pouring water into our rock pool that my team and I made.
We made this in about 5-10 minutes. I’m the one with the scarf around my neck and
the one with my hand around the front of the sprinkler. The competition was to try and
stop the water from going down the drain using rocks. Unfortunately our team lost but
I still thought that my team did well.


  1. Hi Tyla,
    It's sad that your team lost but I think your team did more work than the other team by using teamwork.
    I wonder why nobody has commented on your work.
    Anyway, it feels good to be the first one who has commented on your work.
    Your story is great and you deserve a rating 10/10!
    Well Done,
    From Imarny.

  2. Dear Tyla,
    Bravo your work was amazing. You explained who was in it and everything. I think you could of put more explaination into the class project more. Keep up the great work.

  3. Dear Tyla
    Your blurb about pouring water into the drain was a very good written blurb.I know that you can improve alot more by explaining it more in a detailed way.

    I hope to see more of your work and I hope you use my tips for your next post!

  4. Great description of
    the activity you done
    and great detail,that story
    explained everything well.

    Great job!

    From Katopau