Wednesday, August 15, 2012

This is just to say - by Henry


I have eaten
the ice-cream
that was
in the freezer

and which
you were probably
saving
for your dessert tonight.

Forgive me
it was delightful
so sugary
and freezing cold.

2 comments:

  1. Hey, Henry

    I really like your poem because you have big words in it. If it was my ice-cream I would be angry os don't think about stiling any ice-crem.

    Keep the great work up. :) :p

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  2. Hey Henry,

    I really liked how your poem was so detailed, you made me feel like I wanted to eat ice cream on a hot summers day! Keep up the good work...

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