On Friday the last day of the term Mrs Mackey left Panmure Bridge School. We had a farewell for her on the last day at school. It was cool - the Kapahaka group performed. This is a photo of Mrs Macky at her farewell.
What a great blurb you've got there because you told us the detail and you didn't talk about what happened through out the whole assembley,you just keeped it simple..
Hi, Fatima Nicola typing I think you should maybe try not to put in to many lasts and days in to me because lots of lasts and days, not really what I would do with my story or recount.
On Friday the last day of the term Mrs Mackey left Panmure Bridge School. We had a farewell for her on the last day at school. It was cool - the Kapahaka group performed. This is a photo of Mrs Macky at her farewell.
Hi Fatima
ReplyDeleteI think that you need to be more creative with your title, but you did really well on your blurb.
Keep it up!!!!!!
Hey Fatima
ReplyDeleteWhat a great blurb you've got there because you told us the detail and you didn't talk about what happened through out the whole assembley,you just keeped it simple..
Good on you!!!
Hi, Fatima Nicola typing I think you should maybe try not to put in to many lasts and days in to me because lots of lasts and days, not really what I would do with my story or recount.
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