Friday, November 26, 2010

Its My Turn!-by Amethyst

This is everyone wanting a turn but they had to wait for their turn. We were doing long jump and everyone was tired and so we went and had our lunch. After lunch I was so the sport we did the sack race and I came 2nd this time but I didn't get a medal. I hoped I could get a medal but I didn't - maybe next time!

1 comment:

  1. That is a nice
    imformative blurb but
    did not hook me
    in to the story.
    The sentence "After lunch I was so
    the sport"does not make sense.

    Good job
    From Katopau